http://rainbowmenky.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rainbowmenky.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] twopoint 2009-07-28 08:03 pm (UTC)

WHAT THE FREAK, THIS IS LIKE THE 7TH TIME I ATTEMPT TO WRITE A REVIEW AND MY KEYBOARD FREAKS AROUND AND *EVERYTHING* I WROTE GETS ERASED AND THE PAGE REFRESHED. *breathing hard, holding self back from bashing fists into keyboard*

Dude, I read this last night and nearly wept for joy. And then when I read it my heart was like THUDTHUDTHUD and all compressed because really, Ive never read a more beautiful or eloquent story such as yours, and it really touches me when I read this because I can SMELL the flowers and vines and SEE Erestor in his rich garments and FEEL Glorfindels desire and internal conflict and TASTE the fine wine.

If my future husband doesnt relate to me what Glorfindel related to Erestor about never leaving him, etc, WE ARE GOING TO HAVE SERIOUS ISSUES. That was the sexiest thing I've ever heard. Hot DAMN!

Oh and when Glorfindel raised his voice at Erestor and then stalked away---MY heart was thudding and I felt flushed and tense and bothered just like I imagine Glorfindel was feeling.

I love love adore enjoy j'adore beaucoup love love the intimacy and the sweetness and the sexual tension between G & E, and I THANK YOU for including more Erestor juicy parts because you were being obstinate and stubborn and thick-headed with the other chapters and leaving Glorfindel sexually frustrated, RAWRR, that is why he raised his voice at Erestor, cus he really actually wanted to POUNCE on that sucka!

Cant wait for more, I'll be feeling like my soul is sucked out of me the longer you wait to upload. Dang you! Now I am going to be haunted with daydreams and nightdreams about them! Looking forward to the angst, because I know that it will pass eventually, and then GASP, Glorfindel shall come back and recite his story, telling everyone how he died, and then grabbed that dastardly Mandos by the robes and shook him and roared in his face, because he took him from his beloved Erestor, and he BARKED at him, barked saying, "YOU SHALT NOT WITHHOLD MY LOVE FROM ME!" and Mandos therefore shit his pants and shakily allowed this fiery lion to resurface into the world of the living, and shag his mate. Ahem. The lion has needs. Very very urgent strong elf needs that surpass the passion of other elves, because this elf beat a Balrog, and that takes a lot of balls. So you get my arguement. *cough* (Hahahahah)

SO UPDATE, MY LOVE, I CAN NOT WAIT. MORE ERESTOR, MORE GLORFINDEL, MORE EYE-SHEXING!


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