I don't know if I hate you for posting this unfinished or for not posting it before. I think that I'll choose the latter, since it works well as a vignette.

I liked this. The communication through paper (he, he, like naughty students), the interaction in the café, the interaction in the house, the way you portraited Eszett's control and how they survive under it.. I love how you always make them unsappy, even when they're sexually involved they are so detached from each other, always playing at guessing what the other is thinking.

I should feel offended when talented people dislike their own work because, well, what they will think of mine, then?


I'm curious about the three lines, too.