Please don't hide this sort of piece. I can't even imagine why you would!
I love the repetition that leads to the different situations. The common ties of ankles and the smell of burnt hair. His name.
There is something elusive about what you have posted lately that plays like a melody in my head. I can't pin it down yet, but I will. It's...like a complicated piece of music. It takes a while to catch the rhythm, the melody and all the intertwined themes but once you have it...it's a multifaceted thing of beauty in your mind.
That is how these are for me. They leave me a bit as if I've woken from a dream, smiling, bemused, befuddled, but with a hint of wonder at how it happened.
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Date: 2009-08-29 12:29 am (UTC)I love the repetition that leads to the different situations. The common ties of ankles and the smell of burnt hair. His name.
There is something elusive about what you have posted lately that plays like a melody in my head. I can't pin it down yet, but I will. It's...like a complicated piece of music. It takes a while to catch the rhythm, the melody and all the intertwined themes but once you have it...it's a multifaceted thing of beauty in your mind.
That is how these are for me. They leave me a bit as if I've woken from a dream, smiling, bemused, befuddled, but with a hint of wonder at how it happened.