I'd like to say I was all smart and shit and that I planned the third scene to happen this way, but I am not and I did not. I wrote the third scene to replace the second because I realized that every fic I write has C/S sitting around talking in a bed. Then I put the fic aside for a while and I read it through forgetting about having written the third scene, then I realized that if the experiment had put him in the mind of a certain precognitive while he was all tied up, he could have actually seen the second scene before it happened.
And that's how I decided to leave it. And yes, it is confusing.
I have a very serious Rosenkreuz kink. The possibilities for torture and experiments, leading to angst, are never ending.
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Date: 2009-09-03 02:15 am (UTC)And that's how I decided to leave it. And yes, it is confusing.
I have a very serious Rosenkreuz kink. The possibilities for torture and experiments, leading to angst, are never ending.