Forgive me for not speaking up on this. The snippet you gave is not enough for me to really say much about, so I was staying quiet, but that's not very nice when someone you call friend posts original fic. The language is beautiful, the writing very smooth and flowing. I can't comment on content because...I really don't think you've given enough yet to do so.
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Date: 2009-09-14 08:24 pm (UTC)So...can I say I look forward to more?